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This isn't a sappy romance.
This isn't the fair tale of Romeo and Juliet.
You left me cold, bitter, afraid to even give you a glance.
You were a monster, how could I forget?
I'm truly sorry, love.

If I recall, we met sometime in high school.
I loved to look at you when you passed me in the hall.
But see, you were smooth and casual and I was a fool.
You weren't the monster then that would make me feel belittled and small.
My apologies, love.

We fell in love our sophomore year.
I was young and you were young, silly as we could be.
I treasured your companionship, dear
but you continued to walk over me.
I really do feel remorseful, love.

Our relationship began to fade.
You'd get angry, lash at me and give me bruises.
I was afraid, so I stayed
When people would ask, I'd make up the best excuses.
I'm feeling guilt-ridden, love.

You twisted me, made me believe
that I was the weak one.
But you were always one to deceive.
And shouldn't your guilt trip have begun?
I am shamefaced, love.

I was afraid of you, you were making me insane
I'd hide away from your hands, your touch.
I had stopped loving you, thought of you in disdain
After all, you hadn't really loved me that much...
I am regretful, love.

It gives me great satisfaction to behold
blood on the ground, along with your limp frame.
Against my palm the bloody knife is cold
but even in death, I still love you all the same.
I am mournful, love.

Your eyes are unblinking, staring up but unable to see.
I drop the knife and look down at you.
You must understand that I did this for you and me,
and that I still love you and hopefully you still love me too.
I am insane, love.

This isn't a sappy romance.
This isn't the fair tale of Romeo and Juliet.
I left you lifeless and dead, not letting you get another chance.
I am a monster as you were, and I'll never let myself forget.

I am sorry, love.
©2008 =cxsankh
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I won 1st place in *Writers-Club 's contest with this piece.

The preview image was drawn by my wonderful Libby, aka :iconlibliblovesanime: for me. She gave me permission to use it. ;P
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~BookBrain:iconBookBrain: Mar 11, 2008, 12:29:26 PM
I like it, its sad, but theres that sudden twist at the end, it is very good, i might even fave it, soon, :D

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=cxsankh:iconcxsankh: Mar 11, 2008, 12:58:55 PM
Yay!

It's entered in a contest in Writer's Club.

You should join Writer's Club. You can submit your works, people will visit the link and comment on them. It gives you a bigger audience. They also have nifty contests where you can enter and win things like a free subscription to DA for a month...

The link is in my siggy if you are interested.
~BookBrain:iconBookBrain: Mar 11, 2008, 1:25:23 PM
ok, maybe, sure. :)

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~Gnoochi:iconGnoochi: Mar 12, 2008, 3:09:30 PM Mood: Big Grin
Aww u soo twisted :petting: ^_^

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*youkobutt:iconyoukobutt: Mar 27, 2008, 1:13:56 AM
Gorgeous work, congratulations with winning at *Writers-Club!! It embraces the topic very well indeed!

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=2dazed:icon2dazed: Mar 29, 2008, 8:43:43 AM
Congrats! :hug:

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~Tegzz:iconTegzz: Apr 2, 2008, 2:39:31 PM
I quite like the ending. I'm not so sure about the level of poetry, to be honest, it struck me as prose with line breaks. Still, bravo.

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~Deep-Breath:iconDeep-Breath: Apr 9, 2008, 8:25:26 PM
wow, nice phsycho EA Poe twist there at the end, I enjoyed it.

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