deviant ART

[x]

Who are you? by =cxsankh:iconcxsankh:



Humanity.
We are assortments of personalities, a cooking pot as if to speak.
We are children of the gods, a mixture of some or all

In the devastating fall
of the peaceful city of Troy
were you one of those
set to destroy?

or were you Athena
the penchant of wisdom and war
or were you Aphrodite
who created Helen for Paris's reward

did you fight by the sword
like Hector did
or did you create the chaos
like Eris with the apple of discord?

do you admit
to shooting the arrow into Achilles's heel for an attempt at victory?
Helen, did you just sit
knowing that you were the cause of this story?

There are no lies to being divine
The cursed fall of Troy did nothing but seperate through and through
the personalities were split into two
the bad and malicious, the good and true

Fight it you may
but you shall be forced to agree with what's true
some gods live inside everyone
please do convey to me
who are you?
©2008 =cxsankh
Details
Submitted: March 30
File Size: 1.2 KB
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 9
Favourites & Collections: 7 [who?]

Views
Total: 132
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 1
Today: 1

Thumb

Author's Comments

4/23/08-I won :iconmattiello: 's contest with this entry. I don't feel it was my best, but apparently others did...

Devious Comments

love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

~Keyblade93Nanami:iconKeyblade93Nanami: Mar 30, 2008, 6:04:41 PM
Don't say you won't succeed, I really like the meaning and all. I like how you state your point in this way

--
"If life beats you up, turn around and kick it's butt." -Me

Partners in Insanity:
~Keyblade93Nanami :headbang: ~icecream94
And the not as Insane:
~M-lollipop
~something44:iconsomething44: Mar 31, 2008, 9:26:09 AM
I've written a poem about Troy as well a long time ago... though I focused more on Paris. I was more of a epic writer when I first joined DA. Glad there are people who has grasped mythology in their writings. Good job! :thumbsup:

--
Ideas are more difficult to kill than people, but they can be killed, in the end.

Unleash your *RawEm0tion!
~kinezumi19:iconkinezumi19: Mar 31, 2008, 11:22:41 AM
Well, whatever you enter it in I definately hope it wins!
~Noster7:iconNoster7: Apr 23, 2008, 2:46:49 PM
Awesome poem!

Congrats on winning the contest with it!

--
"I do not have a cereal named after me."
=ArubanoTribalFire:iconArubanoTribalFire: Apr 23, 2008, 3:58:27 PM
Congratulations on winning! Brilliant piece

--
Religion comforts the afflicted and afflicts the comfortable.

Worker of the world unite! You have nothing to lose but your chains!

Porta den man di Dios, porta den man di mi. Todo el mundo, hasi semper fuerte e nos is por biba e din cielo.
=cxsankh:iconcxsankh: Apr 23, 2008, 5:25:52 PM
Thanks to you as well. <3
~Noster7:iconNoster7: Apr 23, 2008, 7:10:07 PM
You're welcome!

--
"I do not have a cereal named after me."
~FarFallaLoduca:iconFarFallaLoduca: 5 days 3 hours ago
This is really good!

--
Let there be no truth; Just trickery in rhyme.